Industry Feedback

This was one of my favourite concepts to create, but sadly was not able to put it in my submission which I definitely regret. Although, I did show it to Previs Animator, Mark Brown, who gave me amazing tips such as.

@12 Figure was a bit too dark

@16 Should have let the camera stayed on the figure 

@18 The book drop was a bit to fast

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Overall he said it was pretty good, which definitely made me happy to hear

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